Different genres of music always bring to mind different places. Just as many regions of the country (or the world, on a larger scale) have their own music, so do the individual landmarks that dot our own personal landscapes. The more we associate certain locations with certain songs, the more those songs come to define that place for us. This can be quite general --the "grunge" movement will always symbolize college for me -- but it can also be much more specific -- "Take the Money and Run" will always evoke the basement of the Alpha Gamma Rho house at WKU on Thursday nights.
Today's lesson asks you to use song lyrics to evoke the sense of a location or place.
USING SETTING TO EVOKE MOOD
One of the most important things to remember when it comes to writing is that everything has to take place somewhere. Nothing happens in a void. Even the most basic newspaper article has to answer the question "Where?" at some point. The same applies to your journaling. Whether you are writing about a person, an event, a conversation, a favorite hobby, etc., there has to be some type of physical location involved. The great thing about this is that developing your description of this physical place not only helps orient your reader, but it also helps you to evoke a certain mood and response in your reader.
Fiction writers do a lot of early development with setting when they begin a short story or novel. Your own journaling can benefit by using some of the same techniques they use, especially if you are focusing on a description of a certain place.
Setting involves a number of components:
- time, which includes the year and the season
- place, which includes city and state, as well as the more general geographic region. You can also include more specific locations, such as the dining room of your first home
- circumstances, which I think of as "what's going on." How do people in this time and place go about their daily activities? Those details are a necessary part of creating and establishing setting.
PLANNING:
There are many ways to go about the next steps -- I'll leave that up to
you. But here are the basics: you need to choose a song that makes you think of a particular place or location. Make sure that the song contains plenty of
connections -- you want to be able to use specific lyrics and lines
from the song to extend and elaborate the ideas in your journaling.
Here are some ideas to help you choose:
- choose a song that brings to mind an important place from your childhood
- pick a song that holds significance in terms of your relationships
- select a song that reminds you of being at some kind of specialized location -- cruising town in your best friends in their car, for example. (Note: In this instance, the focus is not on the event -- driving in the car -- but on the car itself, and particularly the front passenger seat with the window rolled down, music playing, conversation happening, etc)
Once you've chosen a song that describes your important place, use the
graphic organizer in the file below to brainstorm specific details about this place. For those of you who are visual learners, it even includes space to sketch out this place. Special songs create an emotional reaction in us, and your goal with this layout is to describe the place you think of when you hear this song in such a way that your reader will feel the same emotions you feel.
Download SETTING graphic organizer
WRITING:
As you begin your journaling, look for ways to create a specific mood or set of emotions. It may be that particular lyrics from the song offer you a way to include certain details, but there are other things to consider as well:
- Suggest rather than explain.You don't have to say that it's winter if you include details that show someone shoveling the sidewalk or the sound of screaming children as they whoosh down a hill on their sleds.
- Keep length in mind when considering the number of details to include. If you want an extensive piece of journaling, then spread your details out so that they build to the point you are making. On the other hand, if you want briefer journaling, then be selective about the number and type of details you include.
- Include all five senses. I know I will sound like a broken record by the end of the week, but when it comes to creating effective writing, the key is truly involving and engaging all five senses.
A note: Many scrappers don't want to hear this, because they think it means extra work. But if you want your journaling to improve, you're going to have to do a couple of things. 1) Stop thinking of journaling as the last thing to add to a page before finishing. 2) Revise, revise, revise. Write out your journaling and then read back through it with a critical eye. Think about the goal you are trying to achieve and honestly evaluate what you've written. Make changes -- learning what to cut is an important skill to hone. And remember, it is much easier to write too much and then delete bits and pieces than it is to not write enough and try to figure out how to plump things up a bit more.
DESIGN:
This is a perfect opportunity to use the album art as a jumping-off
point for your page design. For each lesson, I'll ask you to focus on
one component of the album art. Today, we'll be focusing on the
PHOTOS-- be inspired by the number of photos, placement, color, or texture.
credits: TTV Frames, Sketchy Stamped Alpha, Spring Sing kit (papers, photo corners, music notes), Family Tree elements (tape), Just My Type elements (journal lines and stitches), all by Audacious Designs
MY LAYOUT:
I chose the song "Desperately Wanting" from the album Friction, Baby by Better than Ezra. This song frequently closes a number of their concerts -- at least the ones I've attended -- and to me, it just characterizes what it's like to be there in the audience, jumping up and down and singing along as loud as I can (especially to the la-la-la's). The title also captures my feelings about attending the famous Christmas shows each year, which is where these photos were taken and what sparked the idea for this layout. I mimicked the photo treatment on the album cover by using the Heartland action from Pioneer Woman and topping it with a photo overlay from Emily Powers and the Songbird Avenue Port au Prince kit. The photos were taken at the annual BTE Christmas show several years ago -- my birthday is the 23rd, and my friends made a huge card for me. All my online friends from the BTE message board signed it, and then the guys in the band posed with the card and signed it as well. It was incredible to wake up and find those pictures in my inbox. Definitely a memory to cherish.
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